Feedback
Hey peepos!
I will have this post placed here, my intention with this is to have a form and way for people to leave any kind of feedback or perhaps post any questions via comments. Nothing of a big deal 🙂
This way it’s easier to keep track of things as well.
However please try to keep it related to this general section of my world building/story etc, any other unrelated questions are fine as well, but I mainly wish to give a way for people to leave feedback or perhaps leave a question or honestly any related message they wish to leave 😄
If there will be anything that is let’s say, asked multiple times etc, I will add it to this post as a Q&A type of edit at the bottom!
(As far as I get it, to comment you just have to fill in a name you want to use, and your email and doesn’t require registration etc…)
A Random Goat
You should revisit the bestiary and update some of its writing couse Uru’Nara is brilliant but it reads kinda stylistically weird.
F.e:
“People quickly figured out, that illuminating settlements during the night helps it avoiding accidental stomping of the place.”
while at the same time
“Uru’Mara needs no food or water or similar substances to survive, as this type of elemental converts light into energy. They purely live by being exposed to the sun, thus they also mostly wander on planets, trying to stay on a more lighted area.”
But this stuff “During this period the fusing essences are invulnerable to nearly every force, and upon successfully fusing themselves into a single new elemental energy, it will launch itself into space. In space it attempts to attract nearby debris and other substances to form a shell around the core energy, which allows it to land properly on other planets.”
*Chef’s kiss*
Will move on to stories and lore soon >_>
Noxxi Greenrose
🙋♀️